Make Your Intro Say More Than What You Do
Where
Go to your Facebook business Page and find the area where you can edit your Intro, Bio or Page details.
What
Someone should be able to quickly understand what your business does, but don't stop there.
Try to communicate what you do, where or who you serve, and something customers value about working with you. Think about the problems your customers want to avoid or something you genuinely do differently.
Example
Instead of: “Residential & commercial painting serving Charlotte, Matthews and Mint Hill.”
Try: “Interior & exterior painting in Charlotte, Matthews & Mint Hill. Careful prep, clear communication and a clean home when we're done.”
Or: “Helping Charlotte area homeowners update their homes without the mess and headaches that can come with painting projects.”
The point isn't to copy these examples. It's to make your description say something more meaningful than “we paint houses.”
Read your current Intro once and ask: “Does this only tell people what we do, or does it also tell them something about why they'd want to work with us?”
If it only describes the service, add one real thing your customers value about working with you.
